Death's Door, Day 2
This is my second day of the Death's Door writing prompt, and I'm having a ton of fun! Personifying Death is pretty much my favorite.

After a long moment of allowing “I dare not” to wait upon “I would,” the dark figure darted forward, and right through the locked metal door.
Inside was lit only by what small amount of sunlight could squeeze through cracks under the door, and through the dark shade that covered the only window. The floor, walls, and low ceiling were all made of the same stone that the outside was made of. The only furnishings were a couple of wooden chairs, most of which were broken.
Propped up against one wall was the figure of a man, dressed in black robes, downing the contents of a bottle.
“S-Sire,” said the dark figure that had just entered. Its voice was hoarse and eerie – like the wind on Halloween night. It was a voice that brought terror … that voice that whispers in the back of your mind, bringing shivers racing down your spine and filling you with a cold sense of dread. This creature, this thing of nightmares, was for some reason kneeling in deference to the drunkard slumped on the floor, speaking as though it were scared of him.
And, in response, the form on the floor grunted.
“Sire, my day’s work is done. Fifty, dead, just as you ordered.”
“What?” the slumped man on the floor said, “Oh, yes, yes, good. Fifty dead, just as I ordered.” He began to laugh, “Just as I ordered? Just as I ordered! Fifty dead, just ‘cause I said so. Hahahahahaha!”
“Sire, you’re not well,” said the shadow, his voice heavy with concern.
“Not well?” the man repeated, taking another swig from his bottle, “I have never been better.”
“Y-yes, Sire.” The nightmare began to creep away, when another of its kind came in through the door.
“Sire!”
“Mwhat?”
“Sire, I went to where you told me – the exact time and place, and the woman wasn’t there! She’s still alive!”
“What are you talking about?” the first shadow demanded.
“I got a job this morning for a thirty eight year, seven month, four day, eight hour year old woman – she was to drown in the harbor at four twenty-two this morning… and she isn’t there!”
“Our master isn’t well,” said the first shadow, “You go back and look for her. Perhaps she will turn up.”
“You think I messed it up,” said the man on the floor.
“N-no, Master, I just….”
“You think I’m unfit, that I’m confused,” there was a dangerous hint of anger in the drunken voice of the man they called Master, “Let me tell you: I’ve been doing this job since before you were dead. I did not get it wrong!” he staggered to his feet, “I am no fool!” he raged. He lifted a chair and threw it across the room. It splintered, and fell to the floor. The man followed it, slumping on to the cold stone.
“No…” he said quietly, his voice slurring, “This is something new….”
*
The shadow stayed in that cold, dark room with his unconscious master through the night and well into the next day. Others came in, reported their work, took their new assignments, and were gone. But this shadow stayed on, waiting.
At last, the form on the floor groaned, rolled over, and opened its eyes. He looked like such an ordinary man, his face drawn and pale, his eyes bloodshot. No one, looking at him, would guess him to be a being of great power.
“You look like Death, sir,” said the shadow, unable to restrain himself.
“Good, that means I haven’t quite lost my touch,” said the man on the ground, his voice tight and full of pain.
“How are you feeling, sir?”
“Rubbish. Get me a drink.”
“No, sir.”
“What did you say?”
“I said no, sir. But I will make you some coffee – black, I think, sir.
“Oh, very well,” said the man, dragging himself into a sitting position with help from one of the few standing chairs.
The servant went off to fix some coffee, leaving the man alone with his slow-moving thoughts. His head hurt to the point where thinking was difficult, but something was nagging at him. Something was wrong.
“You,” he said, addressing the shadow who had just returned with his coffee, “Something happened last night, didn’t it?”
“Yes, sir.”
“Something’s wrong.”
“Your coffee, Sire.”
“What? Oh, yes, my coffee.” He quickly drained the steaming cup, then gave a spluttering cough, “What’s in this?”
“Something I used to drink after I had had a bender, my lord. Back when I was alive.”
“It’s awful.”
“But you will find, sir, that it makes the head feel smaller.”
He had to admit that, after the initial shock, he did feel better, and his head undeniably felt smaller.
“Now, last night we… wait. I know what it is.”
“Sire?”
“Someone isn’t dead!”
“Sire, perhaps you simply got the time wrong. I know it isn’t my place, sir, but everyone makes mistakes.”
“You’d better ruddy well know it’s not your place. I didn’t make a mistake. I can feel it now… someone is alive who shouldn’t be. And I know what needs to be done.”
“Sire?”
Getting to his feet, Death straightened out his robes.
“I’m going after her myself.”
Wednesday, October 27, 2010 | Labels: death's door, Leverage, NaNoWriMo, writing | 0 Comments
Hey, where's Perry?
I'm going to skip the bit where I pretend to apologize for not logging in a billion years but just end up justifying my actions. You all know I'm a failure, I don't have to pretend otherwise.
I've had a pretty nonproductive couple of days... few weeks... ok, summer. But it's been nice. I'm trying to get myself to be ok with doing nothing. Then perhaps my stress levels will go down and I will actually WANT to do something. Yes. Behold my clever plan.
Started another book. I was working on Vandagriff Stones, but I got bored. Bored does NOT equal good writing. So I'm writing this one, because it's fun. There's this awesome witch who was betrayed and trapped in a castle for 80 years, and when she escapes she is intent on getting revenge... with help from a personified version of Death, a group of thieves, a band of pirates, a bounty-hunter fairy, and some talking frog that I haven't actually introduced yet. Yeah, it's pretty awesome.
On Saturday, I went to see Sorcerer's Apprentice. It was highly entertaining -- I LOVE Nicholas Cage, he makes me happy, and I was impressed with his character. The MC was a bit too much of a nerd (versus being a geek, which is awesome), but I still liked him. My biggest problem with the whole movie was that the villain used to be a goodguy, but he betrayed them because he was in love with this chick and she chose the other guy. I mean, c'mon! Can't we think of anything more original? AND there was this whole epic build-up about how evil and scary the main villain was, and then she was defeated by a sissy apprentice in the course of a three-minute duel. Really? She defeated Merlin, but a 20 year old kid kills her with "a bit of science"?
Sorry -- I'm such a writer when I critique. I did still totally LOVE the movie -- except the dog. Dogs just shouldn't be allowed.
I've been thinking (♫"A dangerous pass-time." "I know."♪♫) what the literary world needs more of us high-action fantasy. Sorcerer's guilds and quests and all those seemingly-cliché things that we really don't see enough of. The problem is: I can't write what I most love. I don't know why. I can't seem to get passed interplanetary travel and rebellion groups (I do love a good rebellion). I suppose I will keep working towards the perfect fantasy -- it's what I'm trying for NaNoWriMo.
(I do recommend Gail Carson Levine's The Two Princesses of Bamarre -- that's the sort of thing.)
Doctor Who Season 5 finale was BRILLIANT! Fantastic! Molto bene! Fezzes are cool. Omigoodness, I love this show! Season 6 premiere isn't until December :( Luckily, I have Leverage to carry me until then. "I'm having these weird, weird feelings for... pretzels." I love Parker ^_^ And Nate and Sophie are just being all sorts of good fun this season. "Are we ever going to talk about that kiss?" "Kiss? I don't remember a kiss. I remember a slap. You're still working off the slap." And tonight's episode was just brilliant! I was glad to get a good Elliot episode. This season's been pretty awesome -- what with the group being blackmailed and Sophie refusing to tell us her real name (ok, that's getting pretty frustrating). Good times ^_^
I'm going to be really exciting this week, so I have something epic to write about next week. Until then:
Sunday, July 18, 2010 | Labels: fezzes, Leverage, movie critiques, Phineas and Ferb, Van Gogh | 1 Comments